CHỮA ĐỀ THI THẬT BAND 8.0+ IELTS WRITING TASK 1 & 2 NGÀY 12/8/2023

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Written by: IELTS I-Ready, 14/8/2023

Marked by: Examiner

(IELTS Academic – 12/8/2023)

Question: The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by providing at least six years of free education for each child, so that all children can read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

ANSWER:

Universal education for a minimum period of six years for every student to eradicate illiteracy is the optimal resolution for economic deprivation in emergent nations. I partly agree with this opinion because this is only one of many effective solutions to alleviate this issue. 

Firstly, complimentary access for schooling for a predetermined period can alleviate economic suffering by decreasing the unemployment rate. This is because youths can understand the principles of calculation and literacy skills to secure more profitable job offers in the future. As a result, they may have more disposable income to spend on their basic necessities as well as enjoy an improved quality of life, thus increasing the gross domestic product. 

Moreover, a more educated populace can be an attractive catalyst for foreign investors. In fact, multinationals are often more willing to invest in a knowledgeable and skilful society because these people can invent and apply certain innovations to increase productivity. Consequently, foreign investment can give host countries more available monetary resources to solve pressing social issues, acting as an uplifting trajectory for economic progress.

However, if developed governments should prioritise creating fair trade policies so emergent nations can proactively and fairly engage in international trade, poverty could also be mitigated. In this way, less-wealthy regions can earn more revenue from exporting their products as well as acquire essential imported commodities such as medicines or raw materials for their development. Therefore, they can become more financially self-reliant and reduce disparities between nations. 

In conclusion, I partly contend that encouraging all students to pursue a six-year minimum of formal schooling by waiving tuition fees can help underdeveloped nations combat poverty by generating more employment opportunities and attracting more foreign investment. However, I admit that the formulation of free-trade agreements are also important. Where possible, commitment from governments, and support from international organisations are highly recommended in this case. (306 words)

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