CHỮA ĐỀ THI THẬT BAND 8.0+ IELTS WRITING TASK 1 & 2 NGÀY 30/11/2023

ESSAY INFORMATION:

Written by: IELTS I-Ready, 1/12/2023

Marked by: Ex-BC Examiner

(IELTS Academic – 30/11/2023)

Question: The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

ANSWER:

It is commonly argued that only the authorities can alleviate the scarcity issue of accommodation in metropolises. I mostly contend that the proactive role of the authorities is of paramount importance to resolve the lack of housing in metropolitan areas; however, public private partnerships are also critical. 

My advocacy is predicated on the notion that the government is capable of implementing large-scale policies to tackle this matter. In particular, they may enact  measures such as zoning regulations to expand designated residential regions or capacity. For example, the Vietnamese government has applied many urban planning strategies including subsidies for affordable housing, and the provision of incentives for real estate developers to address housing deficits for poor demographic segments, thereby ensuring equitable access to shelters for all cohorts. 

Moreover, I also believe that governments possess substantial resources and manpower to execute solutions that promote housing availability. This is because allocation of budgets, infrastructure development, and land acquisition capabilities empower governments to drive housing construction initiatives. With regulatory oversight, they ensure compliance with quality standards and fair pricing, effectively utilizing their resources and authority to tackle housing shortages.

However, I concede that Engaging private sectors with their expertise, innovative approaches, and financial resources is vital. Encouraging companies to invest in affordable housing projects as part of their corporate social responsibility initiatives not only supplements governmental efforts but also fosters a sense of social accountability among corporations. Therefore, collaboration between the government and socially responsible corporations can create impactful solutions to address urban housing deficits.

In conclusion,  while some of the funding for housing construction can be deducted from businesses’ contribution, I largely agree with this notion as governments can implement nation-wide regulations and have the power to allocate the national resources to resolve this menace. (292 words)