CHỮA ĐỀ THI THẬT BAND 8.0+ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 NGÀY 11/3/2023

Task 2:

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Written by: IELTS I-Ready, 12/3/2023

Marked by: Examiner

(IELTS Academic – 11/3/2023)

Question: The advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

ANSWER:

In contemporary times, the use of English has been regarded as a standard language in many contexts. In my opinion, I somewhat agree that the merits of English as a global language eclipse its demerits.

On the one hand, English has become a universal language in business, education, and diplomacy. It enables people from different countries to communicate with each other effectively. This has facilitated global trade and investment, which may boost the world’s economy. For example, many trade agreements have been written in this language which has streamlined communication and negotiations between countries and enterprises. Moreover, English is an academic language. In many fields, research is published and communicated in English. Therefore, being proficient in English is essential for individuals to remain competitive in their careers. 

On the other hand, the spread of English as a lingua franca has certain drawbacks. One disadvantage is that it may lead to the extinction of other languages. With the increasing use of English worldwide, some languages are at risk of becoming endangered. This may result in the loss of cultural diversity and identity. In India, for instance, many parents prioritize English education over native language education for their children. This has led to a decline in the use of native languages, such as Hindi, Bengali, and Tamil which may erase an important part of India’s cultural richness. Another disadvantage is that not everyone has access to quality English education. This may create an inequality of opportunities and hinder the progress of individuals and societies. 

In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that the advantages of English as an universal language, including enhancing the world’s economy and individual’s professional achievements, prevail over its shortcomings such as the possible eradication of other languages and creating an unequal society. Therefore, efforts should be made to ensure that everyone has access to quality English education while also preserving the cultural diversity and variety of other languages. (329 words)

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