TASK 2:
ESSAY INFORMATION:
Written by: IELTS I-Ready, 7/4/2024
Marked by: Ex-BC Examiner
(IELTS Academic – 6/4/2024)
Question: There is no need to go out to see live performances (concert…) because it is better to see them on TV or computer screen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
ANSWER:
Many opine that the necessity of attending live performances, such as concerts, has been eradicated since TV or computers have facilitated the ability to watch this type of entertainment from home. Although the convenience that technology has brought is undeniable, I mostly disagree with this opinion since remote watching cannot replicate the experience and opportunities of social engagement of attending live performances.
The foremost justification for my opposition is based on the unparalleled sensory experience provided by attending live performances. Indeed, the energy and atmosphere of a live concert, the acoustics of a theater performance, or the ambiance of a sporting event are all aspects that can only be fully appreciated in person. The immersive nature of being physically present in the audience allows individuals to engage with the performance on a deeper level, fostering a sense of connection and emotional resonance that is often lacking in virtual viewing.
Furthermore, live performances offer opportunities for social interaction and community engagement. Specifically, attending events with friends, family, or fellow enthusiasts not only enhances the enjoyment of the performance but also fosters bonds and creates lasting memories. Additionally, live events often serve as cultural hubs where people from diverse backgrounds come together to celebrate shared interests and passions, contributing to a sense of belonging and unity within society.
Admittedly, I concede that watching live performances from home offers convenience and flexibility. With just a few clicks, individuals can access a wide range of performances from around the world without the hassles such as commuting, queuing for tickets, dealing with crowded venues, or even paying. This convenience is particularly beneficial for those with busy schedules or mobility restrictions, allowing them to enjoy cultural and entertainment experiences that were previously inaccessible.
In conclusion, although technology has made it feasible to appreciate live performances from home, I predominantly disagree that it negates the importance of attending such events. While acknowledging the convenience of remote viewing, the unique experience of being physically present remains irreplaceable, including the sensory immersion and the social interactions that are integral to a human’s life. (344 words)
Highlight Vocabulary:
English | Vietnamese |
Eradicated | Loại bỏ |
Justification | Lời biện minh |
Unparalleled sensory | Giác quan tuyệt vời |
Acoustics | Âm thanh |
Ambiance | Bầu không khí |
Resonance | Sự cộng hưởng |
Fellow | Đồng nghiệp |
Unity | Đoàn kết |
Hassles | Những bất tiện |
Queuing | Xếp hàng |
Negates | Phủ nhận |
Irreplaceable | Không thể thay thế |
Immersion | Sự hoà nhập |